笑看风云 [ft=,2,]怎不忆君颜？[url=http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41][img,45,37]http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41[/img][/url]亲家：怀念谁呢？[/ft]
汉马 [ft=,2,][url=http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41][img,45,37]http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41[/img][/url][ft=,5,]君不见---[/ft]冷风伤身，冷酒伤心。[/ft]
大浪淘沙 [ft=,2,]写的不错啊，欣赏了~才女！[em]e112[/em][/ft] [M][url=http://b39.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=5ae4cdee71de30864604ab51c154b08bc54758dc89b609b388e9c377e65deb26292f5f94b2127c75bd9c911a7a15dbd0f750907196312c872ecfdc5a9a8d282dae716c8c6a562f6feeef3f26ddd0d543c78d18c6&a=41&b=39][img]http://b39.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=5ae4cdee71de30864604ab51c154b08bc54758dc89b609b388e9c377e65deb26292f5f94b2127c75bd9c911a7a15dbd0f750907196312c872ecfdc5a9a8d282dae716c8c6a562f6feeef3f26ddd0d543c78d18c6&a=41&b=39[/img][/url][/M]
爱家-心静 [M][ft=,5,][ft=#92d050,,][ft=,,宋体][ft=,,][ft=,,]（一）[/ft][/ft][ft=,,][ft=,,][ft=,,]花散逐香晨，风情绕自身。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,,][ft=,,][ft=,5,][ft=#92d050,,][ft=,,宋体][ft=,,] 秋村啼怨鸟，犹似叫乡人。 [/ft][ft=,,]（二）霜下秋林石，潺湲满夜冰。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,5,][ft=,,楷体_gb2312][ft=#92d050,,][ft=,,宋体][ft=,,][ft=,,][ft=,,] 萧条游浪碧，早晚荡春陵。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M]
文章评论
xin 向着阳光 努力生长
[ft=,2,]感谢絮园姐妹们，让我有了填词的勇气！[/ft]
笑看风云
[ft=,2,]怎不忆君颜？[url=http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41][img,45,37]http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41[/img][/url]亲家：怀念谁呢？[/ft]
以诚为信
[em]e120[/em]
崇尚完美
[ft=,2,]提点不成熟的看法，能不能把“冷”字和“寒”字对调一下，我觉得那样读起来感觉好一些，说的不一定对，见笑了。[/ft]
汉马
[ft=,2,][url=http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41][img,45,37]http://b41.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=ca7ac4eccbf511945fb87ad0424b48223738a9a279ec1224e6424e899473f83484c6bc2ad8f0e3324c928d71daceab32a056101c1db1a927a30babaeb40b4c6476116abfca563dd87ba7ff318c1f9b71a323c883&a=47&b=41[/img][/url][ft=,5,]君不见---[/ft]冷风伤身，冷酒伤心。[/ft]
大浪淘沙
[ft=,2,]写的不错啊，欣赏了~才女！[em]e112[/em][/ft] [M][url=http://b39.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=5ae4cdee71de30864604ab51c154b08bc54758dc89b609b388e9c377e65deb26292f5f94b2127c75bd9c911a7a15dbd0f750907196312c872ecfdc5a9a8d282dae716c8c6a562f6feeef3f26ddd0d543c78d18c6&a=41&b=39][img]http://b39.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=5ae4cdee71de30864604ab51c154b08bc54758dc89b609b388e9c377e65deb26292f5f94b2127c75bd9c911a7a15dbd0f750907196312c872ecfdc5a9a8d282dae716c8c6a562f6feeef3f26ddd0d543c78d18c6&a=41&b=39[/img][/url][/M]
爱家-心静
[M][ft=,5,][ft=#92d050,,][ft=,,宋体][ft=,,][ft=,,]（一）[/ft][/ft][ft=,,][ft=,,][ft=,,]花散逐香晨，风情绕自身。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,,][ft=,,][ft=,5,][ft=#92d050,,][ft=,,宋体][ft=,,] 秋村啼怨鸟，犹似叫乡人。 [/ft][ft=,,]（二）霜下秋林石，潺湲满夜冰。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,5,][ft=,,楷体_gb2312][ft=#92d050,,][ft=,,宋体][ft=,,][ft=,,][ft=,,] 萧条游浪碧，早晚荡春陵。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M]