五律《落霞固城湖》《官溪夜月》

风景这边独好

落霞固城湖
新韵

 

袅袅渔歌里，金风向晚吹。

一湖秋尽染，两岸锦成堆。

云影随人渡，夕阳送橹归。

 芦花摇曳处，诗兴共霞飞。

 

 

官溪夜泊

新韵 

舟自官溪停，中宵月正明。

 清辉生幻境，玉笛渐空灵。

欸乃一声过，酒旗两岸迎，

妆台何处有？蟾影过窗棂。
 

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北方燕山寒灯

[M][B][ft=,,][ft=,,][ft=,,楷体_gb2312][ft=,5,][ft=#33ffff,,][ft=#990000,6,]忆瑶姬慢[/ft][ft=,,]（平韵）[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=,,][ft=,,][/ft][/ft][/B][/M] [M][ft=,,][B][ft=#ff6600,5,楷体_gb2312]文/北方燕山寒灯[/ft][/B][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,,][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,,][B][ft=#990000,5,楷体_gb2312]《往事已尘烟》[/ft][/B][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,,][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/ft][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]叶曼思翩。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]落雨红叶艳，泣血愁缠。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]望溪流白练，曲曲东寻海，飘入云烟。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]天池触影，偶遇书坛，曲弦唱晚嫣。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]碎碎情，离去无牵挂，隐隐无眠。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]***[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]念昔日、百媚婵娟，晚晴携笑脸，寄盼情缘。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]人生如梦幻，转眼冬梅乱，春又花鲜。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]拒捎信雁，暗淡清心，自尝苦乐篇。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312][/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#33ffff,5,楷体_gb2312]笑墨池，提笔书情趣在填。[/ft][/B][/M]

梦里的水中月

花影，固城湖的秋之美，在你的诗韵中尽现。绚丽的夕阳，细碎了一湖的波光，柳丝飘逸，荻花摇漾，渔歌晚唱……

爱家-心静

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爱家-心静

[M][ft=#00b0f0,,][ft=,,楷体_gb2312][B][ft=,5,]江城子/春梦/爱家心静 [ft=,,]一年天阔玉屏空。醉春风。画秋容。[/ft][/ft] [ft=,5,]轻弄桃花，凉挂杏梢红。[/ft] [ft=,5,]淡墨笔催过雁岭，栖青凤，唤梧桐。[/ft] [ft=,5,]镜娥人梦渐惺松。月帘蓬。影迷崆。[/ft] [ft=,5,]钗坠金华，曾占爱歌中。[/ft] [ft=,5,]载取断云归几处，君不见，夜来龙。[/ft][/B][/ft][/ft][/M]

深山樵夫

[M][B][ft=,5,][ft=#cc0000,,][ft=,,楷体_gb2312]七律.墨苑 [ft=,,]文采逍遥词赋欢，[/ft][ft=,,]瀛台雅韵闻幽兰。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft] [/B][B][ft=#cc0000,5,楷体_gb2312]八方会友觅仙境，[/ft][/B][B][ft=#cc0000,5,楷体_gb2312]四海寻朋聚佛坛。[/ft][/B] [B][ft=#cc0000,5,楷体_gb2312]笔浅何如秋意妙，[/ft][/B][B][ft=#cc0000,5,楷体_gb2312]墨浓得遂夏凭栏。[/ft][/B] [B][ft=#cc0000,5,楷体_gb2312]笺香纸薄寒霜润，[/ft][/B][B][ft=#cc0000,5,楷体_gb2312]梅艳桃红笑雪残。[/ft][/B][/M]

寒烟冷梅

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闲人 何

[ft=,2,]应该注明是 新韵 吧？旧韵的话 韵部不对哦[/ft]

飞舞的鱼

流光何澹澹,人在水之湄.种月荷塘里,夕夕采清辉.

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