诗歌也在网恋

个人日记

                                                          都说这个国度
                                                          这个时代
                                                          诗歌早被边缘化
                                                          可它仍是某些僻如我这般
                                                          爱幻想者不可或缺的食粮

                                                          在这网络被加速
                                                          动车被提速的年代
                                                          那被碾过几次的小生命
                                                          终于被关注了
                                                          网恋也被主流了

                                                          边缘化的诗歌开始疯狂
                                                          成了它的左膀右臂
                                                          看这始作俑者谄媚的嘴脸
                                                          边缘与主流
                                                          爱恋的结构牢固坚强

                                                           用一个个浸着蜜一样的
                                                           透着芬芳的汉字
                                                           堆砌起一座
                                                           神秘的宫殿正富丽堂皇

                                                           亲，原谅我
                                                           天生的才气
                                                           原谅我    不得不用
                                                           空洞却无比诱人的“诗”句
                                                           将你诱惑

                                                           在“诗”的王国里
                                                           我    就是富可敌国的国王
                                                           亲吻我的脚趾吧
                                                           我忠诚的欧巴桑
                                                                     
                                                           算起来
                                                           这比起为你端来米饭
                                                           筑起小窝的好处
                                                           似乎不值得宣扬

                                                           每当喝了爱人熬的小米粥
                                                           我才能够突发奇想
                                                           为你构思出
                                                           比拥有水立方的鸟巢还要鸟巢的天堂

                                                           这时
                                                           我常常会这样想
                                                           彼岸如花的你
                                                           是否也在谁营造的安逸中
                                                           把我向往

文章评论

偷影子的人

爱情它需要花朵，因为它，让爱情更加的完美。生活也需要诗歌，就像鱼儿喜欢水，在我们的心里，它就是我们在歌唱的灵魂。

梅★之梦┈━═☆

[B][ft=#003399,4,]初见 与诗歌网恋 感觉好好浪漫！！！ 可是 久了 为什么会变？？？呵呵 只因太虚幻？？？[em]e163[/em] 姐姐早上好 [em]e176[/em][/ft][/B]

幸福初夏

阿暖写的真好,诗歌在网恋,喻的好恰如其分,我喜欢这种网恋.诗本来就带着爱..........

秦时月

啊暖的文字洒脱，干练，淋漓，还似乎又一股子英雄气!值得学习！[em]e179[/em]

吴钩

楼主的新诗很有特点！问好！

诗海扬波

诗歌也在“网恋”！说得好！即使是“骂”也骂得悦耳动听！佩服才女的胆识！生活中假如没有诗歌，就象一日三餐缺少调料一样寡淡无味，没有情趣！

意象的狩猎者

"在诗的王国里 我 就是富可敌国的国王“，真好，简直和我声称的一模一样！阿暖，你的诗抒情中有哲思，我看了几首都很不错。嗯，你也是一个喜欢诗意生存的人。