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江南小镇
写的多了，总有写的不好的。沙丘的泪让人不能理解，诗句没衔接好。
江南小镇
你的意思表达出来了，但句子之间的自然过渡很重要。我瞎说，你别介意。
江南小镇
诗应该是语言的高度提炼，有时只需要几句话，如果有一个瑕疵，就失败了。
江南小镇
你是个很有才气的女人，很多时候，你句子里的语言也很美。但“我”的味道太浓，不能充分体现生活。更美的句子是生活的再现，要能被大部分人接受，避免闭门造车。让自己的经历带给更多人的美吧！
江南小镇
[QUOTE]引自：♂江南小镇 于2012年01月13日 10时23分24秒发表的评论 你是个很有才气的女人，很多时候，你句子里的语言也很美。但“我”的味道太浓，不能充分体现生活。更美的句子是生活的再现，要能被大部分人接受，避免闭门造车。让自己的经历带给更多人的美吧！[/QUOTE] 新年快乐！！！