花落空，淡了伊人妆……

逸轩恋

                                                                          1
                                                          繁华深处，独自香
                                                          花逝飘零，遍地伤
                                                          淡离别，逝韶华
                                                          红颜未改，双鬓成霜
                                                          待伊人，弱空妆
                                                          良人远洋，独语凄凉
                                                                         2
                                                          浮生初，枯叶已涩
                                                          如梦红尘几度
                                                          未经流年，浮华空谱
                                                          流萤舞成眠
                                                          红颜醉，红尘微醺
                                                          怎堪岁月荏苒，已乱

                                                          恋风去，烟花已笑
                                                          如语相思几缕
                                                          何忆多情，回首余殇
                                                          春花成秋碧
                                                          空弦断，指伤柔情
                                                          怎奈伊人空妆，已淡
                                                                          3
                                                          梦已回，泪却凉
                                                          残念独恋手中香
                                                          相思点点
                                                          红颜已淡，拈花空叹
                                                          惜落花随风
                                                          陌路去，人已散
                                                          无处可寻
                                                                         4
                                                          轻纱飘
                                                          伊人窗前明月镜
                                                          又忆当年
                                                          他扬眉一笑   把酒临风   青丝错落

                                                          夕烟落
                                                          良人身后披风衣
                                                          回首往昔
                                                          她空妆一落   依谁恋影   死生契阔
                                                                          5
                                                          流年曾似水
                                                          怎奈何
                                                          花落空，淡了伊人妆……

文章评论

夏

[ft=,2,]好词，好诗[/ft]

★

啊哈～不错～不错～哥当年小学三年级水平也不过如此～好！鼓掌…

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变成诗词了哟.才男啊

惊蛰。

[ft=,2,] 落 花 有 意[/ft] [ft=,2,][/ft] [ft=,2,] 流 水 太 无 情[/ft]

づ﹕﹗凌雪﹍

[ft=,2,]死生契阔，与子成说，奈何伊人妆已退，人已散。[/ft] [ft=,2,]比我大一些些的哥哥，你有些伤愁哦[/ft]

楠

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Song.

[ft=,2,]你怎么能这么棒！[/ft]

帅的被人砍

诗的确很不错，至少赏心悦目。但我觉得人生中不会只有爱情，脑海里也不能只有回忆。你可以试着写点别的题材的。

车过凬

喜欢这种说不出的伤感、你的文字简洁、但却把情感抒发的淋漓尽致，也希望有你那中才情淡淡的书卷气质、