台阶诗

莲花心语

杨柳斜缕缕湿衣裳
细细飘过青幔窗
心系他乡夫方
留一碗热汤
在案桌上
周公馆
梦中
梦中
周公馆
在案桌上
留一碗热汤
心系他乡夫方
细细飘过青幔窗
杨柳斜缕缕湿衣裳
收拾江湖笑来伴我郎
汶川震数万命丧生
天地无情人有情
大爱护不自轻
丰碑祭英灵
热血诚心
慰川民
勇敢
  
已走

花容瘦
  
日照枝头

盈盈解带出

纤细斯文依露

采摘制下槐花酒

留作病痛时分医救

淅淋
下不停
孤寂聆听
听雨的声音
伤感沉闷的心
雨和泪难分难离
漫长路上多少泥泞
经历艰辛才走到如今
鹅的爱在等待天空放晴

文章评论

释然

只是觉得好听啊,可惜不是太懂啊。

*明月*

这首台阶诗是不是讲述一个江湖女子盼郎归时的意境和心情?还望赐教!....

释然

仔细读来觉得巧啊,意境也好美...

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阶诗确实不错,很新颖,只不过有些残缺,请莫生气噢!

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