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                                                                                   小雪时令气微寒， 

                                                                                   深秋留踪旧斑斓。

                                                                                  庭院树叶犹未尽，

                                                                                  草间可见青绿颜。



                                                                                  近午朔风蓦然起。

                                                                                  鹅毛翻卷飞漫天。  

                                                                                  迷蒙空中云雪集， 

                                                                                  落地无息已成雨。

         

                                                                                 北山延绵裹银素，

                                                                                 经水依山载雪寒。

                                                                                小雪逢雪稀罕见，

                                                                                初冬始露凌烈面。


                                                                                                                         2013年11月22日

                                                                                 
                                                                                               
                                                                              


  
          
                                                                                    
               

                                                                                 

 

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