文/清茶·老井(原创)
(一)
星月无言情难了,泪雨留痕知多少。
千诗倾注相思语,重逢又为离情恼。
(二)
东方鱼白天欲晓,星月无言情难了。
心痴尚有柔情梦,一缕思愁容颜老。
(三)
一琴秋风南飞鸟,不见春光蝶烦恼。
酒醉皆因花落尽, 星月无言情难了。
·茶话诗语·
金乌落山,晚霞散尽。一轮多情月的流光 洒在绿野清居的柴院,变成一片片诗语; 清茶淡淡的幽香袅袅漫起,望夜空,渐出 的星斗像是镶在天空的眼睛,闪动着,似 乎在诉说那曾经有过的情,曾经有过的爱 ······
一阵冷风袭来,落花无声,流入泥土,蝶 儿不知在何处徘徊;此时,我的心醉了, 拙笔涂鸦,留下几句歪诗,编辑成日志, 献给远方的朋友······
2012·7·10 于松原绿野清居 |
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清茶·老井
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