答谢令

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                             答  谢 令
                                  文  依荷听雨
                                                                                 春无声，
                                           雨无声。
                                           浅撒涟漪点绿屏，
                                           迟来游客浓。
 
                                            一池香，
                                            一池波。
                                            杨柳风含雨恋荷，
                                            情深云奈何？
词牌格律        
中中平{韵}，【中中平{韵}】。中仄平平中仄平{韵}，中平中仄平{韵}。
中中平{韵}，【中中平{韵}】。中仄平平中仄平{韵}，中平中仄平{韵}。
                             
仅为答谢益友游客之          无  谱  令  
                                 文    游客  
                                             惊鸿鹭，
                                             柳飞絮。
                                             清风识得荆山玉，
                                             依荷听雨处。
 
                                             北风怒，
                                             叶簌簌。
                                             雪梅无意争归路，
                                              一任群芳妒。
                                                                                      
                                            
                                                              

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