落潮

名作

落潮
薄暮在夜里飘浮
随着海 潮落
星星在海上暗暗 沉没
留下一片荒寂
当风过去 我们
错过无数次相遇
一生也可能这样错过
或许没有痛苦
在所有相似的薄暮时分
写无言的歌 写来写去
或许 你会想起或重塑我
整个一生 在加深的薄暮里
慢慢度过
随着潮涨潮落

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