念怒娇《雪》

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                                              念奴娇.雪              

                                            沧桑天穹
                                            席雪覆
                                            东海龙王惊诧
                                            昏昏沉沉
                                            问何故
                                            月宫戏倒梨树
                                            碎玉飞扬
                                            舌风舐寒
                                            揉碎昨日梦
                                            江山多娇
                                            风华壮志依旧

                                            可叹昔日少年
                                            志高才疏浅
                                            海水即墨
                                            东海即砚
                                            怒吼处
                                            发毫直冲九天
                                            豆蔻年华
                                            两鬓白雪染
                                            吴刚讥我
                                            齿损功缺
                                            初醒梦里百度

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古月春秋

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雨寒

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