醉蓬莱 游张家界，七律 金鞭溪 天子山 黄龙洞 韶山 七绝 黄石寨 十里画廊
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醉蓬莱 · 游张家界
见青山叠翠，云海林涛，溪流竹箐。
嫩叶横生，涧水幽深洞。
临望登高，凭风俯首，看千峰相映。
一道彩屏，画廊十里，红香铺径。
鸟语花聆，笼葱娇木，轻霭朦胧，碧霞盈共。
薄雾升腾，似蓬莱仙境。
御笔神工，五指极顶，巧夺天然景。
点将摘星，晴川欢笑，不归游兴。
注；景点，摘星台，御笔峰，五指峰，十里画廊等。
七律 · 金鞭溪
清溪缓缓甩金鞭，一路欢歌到碧川，
遮日林荫铺古道，倚云花木伫青烟。
风摇紫竹翠光里，人荡红桥绿水边，
郁郁浓丛听笑语，只身好景醉如仙。
七绝 · 黄石寨
秀水云烟入画屏，青山叠翠碧盈盈，
葱葱林木时时见，缕缕香风雾海行。
七律 · 天子山
缆车送我上山巅，端顶凭风揽景天。
云底千峰收眼底，雾中万壑入晴川。
九天仙女峻岭处，十艘帆船峭壁间。
御笔轻阁勾浅墨，一泉飞瀑共霞烟。
七绝 · 十里画廊
十里奇峰谷底生，画廊两岸翠山青，
春风吻得闲花醉，一路飘香到碧穹。
七律 · 黄龙洞
山谷幽宫一洞深，小舟浅底觅仙音。
晶莹剔透龙王座，雄伟斑斓定海针。
石瀑飞直淩壁峭，石花曲卷幔帏歆，
流彩异幻自然景，绮丽神工雕玉樽。
七律 · 韶山
浏阳河道一波红，山上娟花香满冲。
日月同辉松柏里，花团锦簇紫灵丛。
潇潇烟雨湘江地，缕缕轻风故居中。
感慨万千泪眼热，心潮澎湃颂丰功。
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