我想进一趟你的梦里

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                                                                           我想进一趟你的梦里

                                                                           不知你

                                                                           是否愿意？

                                                                           就从你忘记关上的窗

                                                                           和风儿一起轻盈入纬

                                                                           你感觉不到我的气息

                                                                           我也不打扰你的休息

                                                                           只是轻轻地

                                                                           走进你

                                                                           想你就来看看你

 

                                                                           我想进一趟你的梦里

                                                                           告诉你

                                                                           有一树花开的很美丽

                                                                           就在你路过的风景里

                                                                           风吹过落了一地的我爱你

                                                                           湿在雨里

                                                                           天晴了也无法拿出来晒

                                                                           只能默默地收起

                                                                           在一个人的心里

 

                                                                           我想进一趟你的梦里

                                                                           告诉你

                                                                           我买了你爱吃的甜玉米

                                                                           趁热送去

                                                                           就放在你床头

                                                                           你只要一呼吸

                                                                           香味就会吵醒你

                                                                           你只管吃的风卷残席

                                                                          不要问谁这麽懂你

 

                                                                           我想进一趟你的梦里

                                                                           告诉你

                                                                           那封没名字的求爱信是我写的

                                                                           这些年一直没有勇气

                                                                           不知那时你在不在意

                                                                           我却慌乱的呀

                                                                           不敢见你

                                                                           我想让这件事

                                                                           成为千古的谜

                                                                           成为我永远幸福的回忆

 

 

 

文章评论

新学

[ft=,2,] 进梦人是个多么亲切深情细心的人啊！[/ft]

柳絮纷飞

[ft=,2,]风吹的沙沙声是我思念的声音[/ft] [ft=,2,]清晨的露珠是我思念的眼泪[/ft] [ft=,2,]让你进入我的梦里[/ft] [ft=,2,]或者让我驻进你的心里[/ft] [ft=,2,]默然欢喜[/ft] [ft=,2,]寂静相爱[/ft] [ft=,2,]牵挂依旧，友友珍重！[/ft]

静秋

[ft=,2,][ft=#6633cc,4,楷体_gb2312]梦呓幽幽，情呓幽幽。织一段简朴的情感，放入回忆的杯中，宛若清茶，淡了容颜，香了人生！欣赏！[/ft][em]e160[/em][/ft]

奥秘

[ft=,4,仿宋_gb2312]蓝的白的黑的夜 梦是我攀沿幸福的梯子 睡梦之前 念一念你 醒来以后 忘不了你 青叶子闪烁 我在正襟危坐 并且很小心的在梦着 梦一片荒芜的沙漠海 看你在梦和迷之间 摇响帆船 后来都是些反复的画面 满世界的流水小桥 我在你的怀里睡了去 每一次醒来 又继续的梦见了你[/ft] [em]e157[/em][em]e157[/em]

小逯影子

[ft=,2,][url=http://piccache4.soso.com/face/_12835993408265850910][img]http://piccache4.soso.com/face/_12835993408265850910[/img][/url]问君能有几回醉，梦里寻芳踪，试问知音有几何，唯有君知梦。[em]e160[/em][/ft]

张文君

美丽的梦神会来到你身旁。

米兰

[ft=#009999,5,楷体_gb2312]好唯美的诗呦！柔情、细腻、深情款款。米兰欣赏了！[em]e142[/em][/ft]

简单快乐

[ft=,2,]你的梦很甜很美，你的诗直抒胸臆。欣赏。[/ft]

小视野

[ft=,2,]会写诗歌的人情感一定要很丰富，[/ft]

红梅

[ft=#ff0000,4,楷体_gb2312]好痴情的梦，欣赏！祝周末快乐！安好！[em]e160[/em][/ft]