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                                                                                      还梦却遭嘻雀惊          
 
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空谷闻箫

触梦谁堪雀鸟惊，晨窗已染碧痕中。 最是春风严守信，关山万里展客容。 帮你改一下，呵呵我也没有遵守近体诗格式

空谷闻箫

触梦谁堪雀鸟惊，晨窗已染碧痕中。 最是春风严守信，关山万里展客容。 帮你改一下，呵呵我也没有遵守近体诗格式