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云葬两滴泪，漠北又风吹。 黄沙漫漫愁卷，谁解雁南飞？ 昨日惜别故院，徊绕寒塘萋水，却恨日西垂。 无奈寒来早，一步一头回。 瘦溪水，繁花岸，梦春归。 乡音渐近，啾雁拭泪喜还悲。 远涉千山万水，苦历百转千回，又见哪的谁？ 可叹人非雁，衰鬓念成灰. 《水调歌头》格律 上片: (仄)仄(平)平仄，(仄)仄仄平平。(平)平(仄)仄平仄，(仄)仄仄平平。 △ △ (仄)仄(平)平(仄)仄，(仄)仄(平)平(仄)仄，(仄)仄仄平平。 △ (仄)仄(平)平仄，(仄)仄仄平平。 △ 下片: (平)平仄，平(平)仄，仄平平。(平)平(仄)仄平仄，(仄)仄仄平平。 △ △ (仄)仄(平)平(仄)仄， (仄)仄(平)平(仄)仄，(仄)仄仄平平。 △ (仄)仄(平)平仄，(仄)仄仄平平。 △ 本词牌别名较多，另有叫：江南好、台城游、花犯念奴、元会曲。历代使用本词牌者甚多， 也许因为如此，其格律各行其是，才出现了平韵、错叶、通叶三种格式,分别以曹冠、苏 轼、贺铸三人的作品为代表。填词者选其做调，要慎之要慎。 主要特点： 1、 全词95字；上片48字，下片47字，4平韵。 2、 上片开头两句、第五第六句和歇拍两句，下片第六第七句、结拍两句；常有作成对仗的。有时是上面所说的那些全部成对；而大多数是一两处成对。不过应该清楚，这些对子不像律诗，它不是很工稳的，像错叶格的“人有悲欢离合，月有阴晴圆缺”，如此这般就是 3、 上片第三第四句，下片第四第五句，属特殊带拗句式。它有时作成前四后七，有时又作成前六后五。但不管句式如何变化，其平仄都不能作太大改动，不然就失去其特有的拗味。 4、 上片第四、下片第五句，多数情况下，前四字平仄都如格律所标。也可以说，这是本词牌的特色之一。但也有于第三字改用仄声的。总之，这二句的第一第三字，只要不同时作仄就不算太离谱。
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