五一闲度

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五一自叹影只单,闲等君风亦淡然。

不费金钱观绿景,宁将闲趣傍青山。

拈来拙句随椽笔,送去佳节任指弹。

奈何非我心境处,然悠尘世笑情缘。 

 



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不费金钱观景绿,宁将闲趣傍青山。绿景对青山,更好吧。这句很喜欢。

[ft=#33ff00,5,楷体_gb2312]呵呵,很不错的当代“春闺怨”。毕竟男儿多薄幸, 误人两字是功名,你倒是看的很开哟![/ft]

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