与初学格律诗友共勉 【七绝】律谱

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                                           与初学格律诗友共勉  律谱

 

 

 【七绝】四式:

 

                    【一】 ⊙仄平平仄仄平,(韵)

⊙平⊙仄仄平平。(韵)

                                ⊙平⊙仄平平仄,

⊙仄平平仄仄平。(韵)

 

                    【二】 ⊙仄⊙平平仄仄,

⊙平⊙仄仄平平。(韵)

                                ⊙平⊙仄平平仄,

⊙仄平平仄仄平。(韵)

 

                     【三】⊙平⊙仄仄平平,(韵)

⊙仄平平仄仄平。(韵)

                                ⊙仄⊙平平仄仄,

⊙平⊙仄仄平平。(韵)

 

                      【四】⊙平⊙仄平平仄,

⊙仄平平仄仄平。(韵)

                                ⊙仄⊙平平仄仄,

⊙平⊙仄仄平平。(韵)


须注意的

 

                              1,以上四种格式为基本格式; 

2,每首诗里28个字,4句;

                              3,每句里标明的符号:

                                   平 = 1,2声字;

                                   仄=  3,4声字;

                                   ⊙= 可平 ,可仄;

                              4,每句里的1, 3,5 不论;

                                                  2, 4,6 分明;

                              5, 【一】,【三】格式三平尾 ;                    

                              6, 【二】,【四】格式二平尾;

                                                   7, 切忌  一句里 平平平结尾;

                                                           仄仄仄结尾;

                              8,诗的意境写景喻人,情景交融;

                              9,写人突出特点,忌大众化;

                                                                            

 

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天涯ベ落魄客

第一式,七绝仄起首句入韵式,正格【仄仄平平仄仄平】变格【⊙仄平平⊙仄平】