满江红.秋声赋

个人日记

                           满江红.游徐马荒
                                                                                 
 
                                                                                 车去西郊，抬放眼，青禾绿树。
                                                                                 初落定，采风群里，美人无数。
                                                                                     长发及腰连草羡，
                                                                                      彩裙齐膝遭花妒。 
                                                                                  君不见，舟浅载红妆，欢欣处。

                                                                                        撑阳伞，频眷顾。
                                                                                        边照相，徐徐入。
                                                                                       踏长堤惊起几行白鹭。
                                                                                         人在画中行不够，
                                                                                         云从水里飘飞度。
                                                                                     回身看，尽湿地平湖，秋声赋。

 




 


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秋语(飘)

好一个徐马荒印象，在朋友的诗词里映入眼帘是一片繁荣景象。

zy雪中梅

人在画中行不够， 云从水里飘飞出。 美妙的画面感 [em]e163[/em]