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个人日记

                                                                  
                                                                                    无缘今生只为家（仄起.坡底韵）                  
                                                                               无缘今生只为家，流年似水对空华。     
                                                                               填词写赋图情趣，作对吟诗赞柳花。
                                                                               机缘相逢酬知己，银屏偶遇乐朝霞。
                                                                               风过云醒闲听雨，雾散心开自品茶。
       

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“无缘今生只为家"律上有连四平么?