雪潮人 [ft=#ff0000,5,黑体] 《即席》[/ft] [ft=#ff0000,5,黑体]行香子曲唱卿喉，天涯漂泊不胜愁。[/ft] [ft=#ff0000,5,黑体]镜里朱颜瘦几许，独抚瑶琴珠泪流。[/ft] [ft=#6600ff,5,黑体]雁过留声[/ft]
贫尼静悟*JFH5222* [ft=#990000,5,]呵呵，姐姐，这哪像瞎拼凑哦，就连“自嘲”都写得这么好。[em]e145[/em]好姐姐，莫酸楚，新愁旧恨你别绕。梅花落，雪消去，欣赏春景多妖娆。姐姐，要开心哦！[em]e178[/em][/ft]
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不堪回首 行香子 清要无因，举选艰辛。系书钱、须要十分。浮名浮利，虚苦劳神。叹旅中愁，心中闷，部中身。 虽抱文章，苦苦推寻。更休说、谁假谁真。不如归去，作一齐民。免一会来，一会讨，一会论。 -----宋·范觉民
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深谷雅兰
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馨语花艺
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雪潮人
[ft=#ff0000,5,黑体] 《即席》[/ft] [ft=#ff0000,5,黑体]行香子曲唱卿喉，天涯漂泊不胜愁。[/ft] [ft=#ff0000,5,黑体]镜里朱颜瘦几许，独抚瑶琴珠泪流。[/ft] [ft=#6600ff,5,黑体]雁过留声[/ft]
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不堪回首
行香子 清要无因，举选艰辛。系书钱、须要十分。浮名浮利，虚苦劳神。叹旅中愁，心中闷，部中身。 虽抱文章，苦苦推寻。更休说、谁假谁真。不如归去，作一齐民。免一会来，一会讨，一会论。 -----宋·范觉民
不堪回首
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