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紫玫 [ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]佳人把笛韵悠扬，[/B][/ft] [ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]素身卧荷思君郎，[/B][/ft] [ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]碧水倩影荡涟漪，[/B][/ft] [ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]词曲可能传远方？[/B][/ft]
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学步桥
[ft=,2,]标准的七律。严密扣题，意境感人，语句优美；平仄、韵律无可挑剔。特别是第3-4句、第5-6句的对仗（这是律诗的特点，也正是难点所在）工整合体，堪称佳作！[/ft]
钰民
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雨竹
[ft=#009900,4,]欣赏叶子姐美文佳作！好棒！[em]e179[/em][/ft]
雨竹
[ft=#009900,4,]喜欢在这清寂的夜晚欣赏这清光流泻，青荷淡淡的幽青！[/ft] [url=http://b71.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=c8c21f0cfc14e212aa5992e4bc09655b063ee1a38c91890e73202efab38a1cd885cb87fc8420dc24894a81fdf6abd4373f0ac6993c4c53c91a8509c6d670d5fc9e4afc5cb3af3e986e3801084024ec7804b1dd43&a=72&b=71][img,470,390]http://b71.photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl4_b=c8c21f0cfc14e212aa5992e4bc09655b063ee1a38c91890e73202efab38a1cd885cb87fc8420dc24894a81fdf6abd4373f0ac6993c4c53c91a8509c6d670d5fc9e4afc5cb3af3e986e3801084024ec7804b1dd43&a=72&b=71[/img][/url]
紫玫
[ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]佳人把笛韵悠扬，[/B][/ft] [ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]素身卧荷思君郎，[/B][/ft] [ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]碧水倩影荡涟漪，[/B][/ft] [ft=#ff6633,5,楷体_gb2312][B]词曲可能传远方？[/B][/ft]
倾听、雨落
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淡墨留痕
[M][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体][B]叶子姐，妹妹昨晚就来了！[/B][/ft][/M] [M][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体][B]已经在您空间打好草稿了，[/B][/ft][/M] [M][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体][B]正要给姐姐和一首呢，[/B][/ft][/M] [M][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体][B]可我的电脑掉线了，[/B][/ft][/M] [M][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体][B]现在才上来！妹妹凑趣，姐姐见笑了哦！[/B][/ft][/M] [M][B][/B] [/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体]七律·题图·荷塘月色[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体][/ft][/B] [/M] [M] [/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体]淡墨留痕[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体][/ft][/B] [/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体]衣袂轻盈映碧塘，纤手唇吻玉笛扬，[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体]嫰荷恰似霓裳舞，托起娇躯醉月光。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体]雨润清荷珠玉落，风吹款款送馨香。[/ft][/B][/M] [M][B][ft=#00ff33,5,黑体]千古吟颂脱俗性，万世留书赋永芳。[/ft][/B][/M]
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溪涧幽兰
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溪涧幽兰
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