念奴娇 /柯十三
十三月的擦肩
念奴娇
钟谨
柯十三
柯十三
夜风来袭,一片文愁。
人满槛,历数数,
冰未在其中。
微吟长短句,帘影灯昏,
南山钟声响,惊动四方,
夜色遥送寒香。
三两语,停留半晌。
只见笑语盈盈,黛痕已现,
东风随尔语,翠叶吹凉,
独留谨门外,触动玲珑,
清香唯飘诗意。
清香唯飘诗意。
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世语新说
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