〈虞美人〉情丝。七律。秋韵

个人日记

                                                   虞美人 情丝
                                                      紫韵
                                      纤纤一脉红尘弄,无语思忧梦。

                                      群芳丛里待花魁,道是肝肠玉碎泪双垂。
                                         秋临叶落霜常下,汝为君独嫁?
                                        相思笺里颂来回,总是枉酸诗意掷空杯。

             
                            

                                         秋韵。紫韵

                                       淫淫细雨奏窗涟
                                       瑟瑟秋风啸冷笺
                                       诗尽难书惆怅梦
                                       歌绝岂语失落篇
                                       飘零枫叶相思药
                                       馥郁桂花回味筵
                                       浊酒红尘谁欲共?
                                       残茶伴月几回仙?

                 

 

                                            谁。紫韵原作

                                           世间难有真情求

                                           叵测人心如水流

                                           初识相融同义谋

                                           时长意绝惹情仇

                                           疑前猜后道长短

                                           东去西来找丑羞

                                           梦里一场何苦累?

                                           谁人知晓喜或愁?

 

文章评论

孤独王子

[M][ft=#ff0033,5,]人生如梦弹指间,紫韵[情丝][秋韵]眠[/ft][/M] [M][ft=#ff0033,5,]不知与[谁]悄悄语?相思惆怅忆旧颜。[/ft][/M] [M][em]e120[/em][em]e163[/em][/M]

零0距0离

所有得与失,还有那些是是非非,真的无法说清。问心无愧就好!

求静(拒闲聊)

[ft=,4,]看着诗句感到哀伤,奔放些好吗[em]e120[/em][em]e181[/em][/ft]

枫叶红了

[ft=,2,]听着“寂静的天空”,看着紫韵的“秋韵”,伤感的美![em]e163[/em][/ft]

诗意

[ft=,2,]姐姐[em]e178[/em][/ft]

小镇伊人

[ft=,2,]梦里一场何苦累,谁人知晓喜与愁。[em]e163[/em][/ft]

冷玉

好诗,特别是第二首,道尽了人与人之间相处的喜乐与无奈。

临溪听月

[ft=,2,]听着伤感的歌曲,欣赏着,此时,别有一番风味在心头。[/ft]