雨听残荷

个人日记

 

 

                                                                           

                                                                      银雨霏霏

                                                                      细线划过苍穹

                                                                      巨大的网

                                                                      凄冷的风

                                                                      笼罩四野

                                                                      穿堂而过

                                                                      游人的眼

                                                                      檐角的雀

                                                                      迷乱低吟

 

 

                                                                      静静的水榭

                                                                      摇曳的残荷

                                                                      风雨中

                                                                      那是一抹怎样的荷啊

                                                                      没有夏荷的素雅宁静

                                                                      没有秋荷的热情灿烂

                                                                      零落的花瓣

                                                                      发黄卷曲

                                                                      那样的突兀

                                                                      那样的悲哀

                                                                      已逝的锦瑟

                                                                      岁月的蹉跎

                                                                      留下了什么？

                                                                     

 

                                                                      无喜无悲

                                                                      看透了生死

                                                                      还奢求什么呢？

                                                                      孑立风雨

                                                                      散落点点

                                                                      化作尘泥

                                                                      秦时的明月

                                                                      汉时的关隘

                                                                      唐代的环佩

                                                                      宋朝的衣裙

                                                                      庄生晓梦迷蝴蝶

                                                                      仅是一抹衰兰

                                                                      几杆瘦竹

                                                                      一盏清茶

                                                                      勾勒点染出世的清凉

                                                                      残荷

                                                                      氤氲出禅的意境

                                                                      没有了

                                                                      浓词艳赋的堆砌

                                                                      花团锦簇的渲染

                                                                      也许

                                                                      这才是真正的自我---------

 

 

                                                                      沉吟中

                                                                      对面的戏台

                                                                      袅袅升起

                                                                      温婉的苏州评弹

                                                                      “人生来世梦一场

                                                                      世间俗物不可留

                                                                      --------”

                                                                      于是

                                                                      我撑起伞

                                                                      缓入雨中

                                                                      肃然回眸

                                                                      荷塘中的残荷

                                                                      依旧静静

                                                                      立于水中--------

文章评论

茹烟

古朴、清幽、雅韵...就感觉置身喧嚣红尘之外。联想到“秋阴不散霜飞晚，留得残荷听雨声”中诗人孤零，相思，寂寥的心韵。[em]e179[/em]

人生如戏

[em]e179[/em][ft=#ff66cc,4,宋体]了不得。把个留得残荷听雨声演绎的如此幽雅如此出神入化。月吟好棒！[em]e142[/em][/ft]

杏

[ft=,2,]残荷 不在舞倩影 赞荷声声稀[/ft]

太阳雨

[ft=,2,]残荷，去掉了浓妆艳抹，回归了素面朝天的本色。[em]e163[/em][/ft] [ft=,2,]也许也是作者的本色吧？！[em]e100[/em][/ft]

☆高～高

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柳泉人家（不加群）

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杨柳青雅

[ft=,2,]朋友的文笔令人叹服！佳作拜读了，谢谢！[/ft]

◆◇、颖颖

[ft=,4,]“人生来世梦一场，世间俗物不可留.....”这才是最高境界。[/ft]

夜未央

[ft=,2,]真细腻。[em]e179[/em][/ft]

伤的泪

残荷池中留，雨声打破愁，人生寻觅有几何。。。。。。

雨荷

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潇湘竹女

[M][ft=,6,][ft=,,仿宋_gb2312][ft=#ffff00,,][ft=,6,]《潇湘竹女》赠好友藏头诗[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M] [M][ft=,6,][ft=,,仿宋_gb2312][ft=#ffff00,,][ft=,6,]《七律。贺新春》 《潇》逢运转在龙年， 《湘》雨生息继相传。 《竹》报平安四海水， 《女》盛风茂五洲行。 《恭》迎滚滚财源旺， 《贺》庆吉祥如意连。 《新》岁欢歌身健壮， 《春》风得意事双全。[/ft][/ft][/ft][/ft][/M]