牡丹情

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        为了缓解外债带给我过度紧张的神经，我决定把外债写成一个个小目标，每完成一个就划掉一个，我二哥的外债大概有五万六千元，我决定帮他分担五万，我计划每个月给他寄500，这样就需要写100个500，然后每个月寄一次就划掉一个500，八年后将全部划完，不管怎样，还是无形中给自己增加了压力，说实话，真有点累。
        刚刚拖着疲惫的身体回到家，打开电脑，看到暗香有更新，她居然开始写诗了，这真出乎我的意外，为了鼓励她搞闯作，我决定支持她一回，说实话，现在很累，胳膊都是疼的，尽管这样也要送她一篇，以资鼓励。是为序。

                                                                                       牡丹情 
                                                                                                      —— 送暗香 
                                                                      记得那年识暗香，智商足有九十三
                                                                      淑女如花莺声燕，牡丹看了直瞪眼
                                                                      一来二去成好友，无话不谈两年半
                                                                      如今智商在递减，牡丹自责垂泪帘 
                                                         
                                                                      牡丹自责垂泪帘，独弹琵琶对月弯
                                                                      不止智商在递减，淑女气质也玩完
                                                                      张口闭口会扯淡，这叫牡丹情何堪
                                                                      万水千山不等闲，挽救暗香在今晚
                                 
                                                                      挽救暗香在今晚，再苦再累也心甘
                                                                      冰冻三尺非日寒，救你只需顷刻间
                                                                      花自飘零水自流，光阴一去不复返
                                                                      多看书来勤思考，少和卫哥瞎扯淡
 
                                                                       少和卫哥瞎扯淡，寂寞无聊怎么办
                                                                       无聊你就找牡丹，给你人生多指点
                                                                       指点过后你再看，前程似锦花满园
                                                                       大梦一觉赋鹧鸪，一赋二赋就没完
                                            
                                                                       一赋二赋就没完，赋完原是瞎扯淡
                                                                       几番辗转为哪般，莫非思想已跑偏
                                                                       只道相思不曾闲，试问那君可缠绵
                                                                       红尘望尽负心汉，女人不能瞎想念
 
                                                                      女人不能瞎想念，两情相悦才美满
                                                                      独自一人在煎熬，纯粹就是大傻蛋
                                                                      莫怪男人负心汉，只怨女人梦不断
                                                                      回首向来萧瑟处，风雨淡然是晴天

                                                                      风雨淡然是晴天，韶华不能空留念
                                                                      爱恨情仇练心地，过眼云烟视不见
                                                                      度量气魄谈笑间，千古风流不惧男
                                                                      跟我再混三年半，暗香智商还得减

                                                                      暗香智商还得减，有得有失才圆满
                                                                      减来减去不思量，情义见长金难换
                                                                      若干年后回头望，牡丹还在水那端
                                                                      即兴打油送暗香，圣诞快乐祝平安

                                                                      圣诞快乐祝平安，来年好运把你伴
                                                                      牡丹情深似大海，点滴字句写不完
                                                                      万水千山总是情，此情愿你记心中
                                                                      相逢定是百年缘，但愿千里共婵娟 

                                                                                                                                              ——  2012.12.25圣诞夜即笔 






文章评论

暗 香

咳，后面的我就不说了。。。 就第一段吧，丹丹，您这智商也是与日递减呐，初识时，您从哪儿见我面如花莺声燕了？我那时连照片都不会传呢

暗 香

“切看满纸荒唐言，字字皆为虾扯蛋” ............ 哈哈，哈哈，这句终于派上用场咯 ......嘿嘿，天遂人愿呐......

柳笛悠扬

我也想选在圣诞节拜牡丹为师！[em]e185[/em]

栖星伴月

[em]e128[/em][em]e128[/em]女人不能瞎想念[em]e179[/em] 桃花潭水深千尺，不及“花香”入根髓[em]e120[/em]

长脚的浮萍

风携雪，雪随风，袅袅婷婷挥洒中，君道风仪雪，我道雪傍风、、、、、

往事随风

姐姐的文笔很棒，好像在城市达人上榜的帖子也不少，我就分享过。久仰，久仰[em]e183[/em]祝圣诞节快乐！

jack

[ft=,,tahoma]"这样就需要写100个500，然后每个月寄一次就划掉一个500，八年后将全部划完"。[/ft][em]e179[/em] 不容易！奇女子！[em]e178[/em]

云者

这牡丹忒有才了[em]e179[/em]这诗连的妙！赞一个！

卫

但愿千里共婵娟 百花丛中惟牡丹 开花时节动京城 着色之后赛玉环 圣诞夜里没事干 写诗闯作表心愿 琴剑错逢相识晚 隔屏相望牵手难

同行者

墙角一枝牡丹，凌寒咋还开放。 遥知花落何处，为有暗自飘香。

云岫

不鸣则已亦奇葩，一鸣惊人牡丹花。 娇媚倾城人见爱，豪情潇洒众友夸。

云岫

长诗九段堪称佳，别具一格顶呱呱。 女中豪杰显大气，空间盛开一枝花。

茗珥

[em]e120[/em][em]e120[/em]