姚锦原创诗词--生查子词一首--次韵冷玉靓妹

姚瑾狗屁诗词

---------读诗词专家羊城律政佳人冷玉妹妹生查子一词,颇有感慨,但老帅哥不懂诗词韵律,胡写一通,次韵反其意而用之,玩笑耳,敬请冷玉妹妹看在老乡面上勿笑话哦。

                                             -------------仿生查子词次韵冷玉靓妹

                                                      只因爱恨痴,
                                                      反说伤心话。
                                                      梅菊不流俗,
                                                      偏待冬开罢。


                                                      翩翩黄衫儿,
                                                      依依蔷薇架。
                                                      风拂翠罗裙,
                                                       羞立桃花下 。

                                                      ------湖南姚锦于长沙

                                                              附冷玉妹妹原作【生查子。有寄】

                                                  昨写断肠诗,

                                                  今变伤心话。

                                                   锁在雪山中,

                                                   静待春开罢。

                                                   风绿柳墙头,    

                                                            雨洒蔷薇架。

                                                            君子若回眸,

我立桃花下  。     

 

 

                                                                                             
 

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冷玉

[ft=,2,]就如照镜子一般,镜内仿照的人物更美,你这仿词比我那美多了。[em]e112[/em][/ft]